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Corrections proposed for the text of the summary report on the XXIe campaign of excavation at Enkomi-Alasia, to appear in the journal Syria.
p. 321, penultimate line: should the title Enkomi-Alasia II be kept? likewise, p. 333, l. 2.
p. 324, n. 1: to be set in two continuous lines and not in column form.
p. 325, title no. 3: keeping the title of Lagarce's partial report destroys the unity of the overall report; it would be necessary, it seems to me, to replace the title printed with the following title: The area of the street no. 5, comparable to the titles previously adopted
likewise, p. 328, title no. 4: I would propose: "Supplementary investigations in quarter 4 E.
p. 325, l. 7-8: the date indications given here merely reproduce those which have been given above.
p. 326, l. 11 and 16: "Building 18" is printed in roman type and with an initial capital, iniin contrast to p. 322, l. 5 and 7.
p. 328, l 23: GH.6 cannot be a square; one could write F 6 to H 6. ok
p. 329, l. 12: is R. III explicit enough? should one not write, at least, CR III?
p. 329, l. 15: "celui-là" is not very clear and it would no doubt be preferable to delete it oui while writing Nord-Sud (and not N-S) to fill the space available.
p.329, 330, 332: I would propose standardizing the designation of the periods:
p.329, l. 1: Late Bronze I (not 1) and Middle Bronze III
p.330, l. 19: Late Cypriot II, Late Cypriot III (not 2 and 3).
yesl.21: Late Cypriot II.
l.27: Late Bronze I and Late Bronze II.
p.332, l. 3: Late Bronze III.-
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