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Fig. 7. [handwritten: I] do not know where to suggest placing this figure. It ought to be adjacent to Table C to which it is pertinent: [handwritten: ???]
Fig. 8. Place adjacent to Conclusion, galley 50.
Fig. 9. Place nearer to beginning of "The Fountain House", galley 52.
Fig. 10. Legend of this figure should include page reference since the figure is far removed from any reference to it in the text ([handwritten: I think something must have fallen out of Mr. Last's text about it in the course of one of his several revisions]).
Fig. 11. Change legend to "Distribution box, Apollo-Northwest Cistern (II)"
I do not feel that we should be charged for the changes suggested above which are due to the printer's rearrangements of Mr. Last's sequence. In the past you consulted us about various placements of this kind and I am surprised that you did not do so this time. Otherwise, I am very pleased with the results, as always.
Sincerely yours,
Handwritten: signature
G. Roger Edwards
65 figures hard to readstruck struck outadded written in above” jug ditto, and what it repeatsword reading not certain
